It's cold out there.

Take a flight,into the night
A dark,endless expanse of a cold unknown future
To stop and look behind
Is to bask oneself in the false glow of comfort

Comfort which arose from the warmth
Of all those who loved and cared to smile at you
False, as gone are all of them
With you just gazing at the blank emptiness...

Look ahead with a decisive purpose
To move on and take it as it comes
But when will the hope of having
Someone who shares the vision die..?

As life seems like a prose
Like a poem which doesnt rhyme
A tree which hasnt seen the spring
A leaf waiting to touch its ground ..

I fly off....into the dark,the unknown.....
But its cold out there..
The warmth beckons me back
But what shall I choose to have
A hope which has no future,
Or a future which has no hope?

Comments

Anonymous said…
Interesting stuff..
Seems to be the sentiments of somebody who is about to walk out on to an hitherto unknown path, without knowing what the future has in store.
In my case, I would go for the hope which "seems" to have no future.The reason I say this is because I believe that I can make my future as long as I hold hope, while the opposite does not hold true for me.
Anyways, keep writing...
Wish you & your loved ones a Happy Diwali, Eid & a prosperous New Year!!
Anonymous said…
Splendid poem...
Anonymous said…
Just like a life that waits to greet the end,
Mine rises to meet the unknown,
When your mind flees to the crecvices dark,
I seek the answer that you fear,

When the roads to bliss,
Lead to a path youre scared to walk down,
My calm seeks a stormy coast,
Like your strorm seeks a dove

Or maybe it's just a candle,
Where I seek the burning flame,
But would you know my darkness
When you seek someone to blame?
Anonymous said…
wonderful lines :)

bye :)
nidhi
Anonymous said…
Good one yaar :)
Anonymous said…
i love this....!!!! :)
wow..
Anonymous said…
@ Sameer - Bang On. :)Infact wrote it when I realised I'll have to leave my family and folks to head for strange city in few months :(. As for the choice,I'd rather have a future which has hope...What better than to win a losing battle ;)!

@ Manish - Thanks mate :)

@ Mike - That seems like my Guardian Angel talking to me :).Very thoughtful :).
Anonymous said…
@ Nidhi,Vijay and Astha - Thankoo thankoo :)
Anonymous said…
Have posted a poem on my blog.. One on a lighter note this time..
Please take a look...
Your comment is a mushtttt....:-P
Anonymous said…
I m waiting for Dr P Ranga Rao's Email ID or Phone No. Please send it at suryakantsharma68@gmail.com

Regards
SK
Anonymous said…
Oops the previous post by SK for Miss Z

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